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Posted to ACW-L, WCenter, NCTE-Talk,
and TEACH on 10/30/98.
These audience analysis techniques ask
students to think about their readers from a slightly different point
of view (as an opponent in a soccer game, for instance), or to think
about the similarities and differences that they have to their
readers. The exercises lean more toward persuasive and informative
writing assignments. Though they could be rephrased or adapted for
other uses.
- Your job in your paper is convince a
group of people to change their minds and adopt your point of view
on a current issue. Think of your audience as a group of players
on an opposing soccer team (or other athletic team). Whenever two
teams meet, they analyze each other's skills and devise strategies
to help them do their best. For instance, you might notice that
the goalie is a little slower moving to block balls on the left
side of the net. After noting that weakness, you'd create a new
playing strategy to help score a point -- you'd try to kick to the
goalie's left side. What are the strengths of the opposing
position that your audience holds? What are the weaknesses? What
strategies can you devise based on these strengths and
weaknesses?
- Have a Devil's Advocate discussion.
Each person in your group will present a position on an issue and
the facts and details that support that position. Once someone has
posted a position, the rest of your group members play devil's
advocate -- responding to the position by suggesting
counter-positions and counter-arguments. Give as many responses to
the writer's position as you can. As your group members give
counter-positions, respond to the issues. Debate each person's
topic for at least 15 minutes. When you finish with one writer in
your group, move to the next one until everyone in the group has
had a chance to share a topic.
Once everyone has finished, look over
the notes for your topic. Which positions are your readers likely
to believe? Which of the arguments would they be likely to make?
What counter-arguments are convincing? Use the list to focus on
the things that matter to your readers.
NOTE: If students are working online
(in an InterChange session or MOO session), you can save a
transcript; if they're working in an oral discussion setting, have
someone from each group take notes for the writer. Students could
also complete this exercise in email.
- Create your own graphic organizer to
brainstorm on your audience's position and think about your
writing task. On a sheet of paper, draw a continuum like
this:
Complete
Agreement
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Some
Agreement
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Some
Disagreement
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Complete
Disagreement
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Under the columns, sketch out the points and related issues that
you and a reader who adopts the opposing position share, based on
the headings in the organizer. For instance, say you were writing
that more money should be budgeted for classroom equipment and an
opposing reader argues that money should be budgeted instead for
teachers' salaries. You and your reader both agree that more money
should be spend on education, so you are in complete agreement.
You probably also agree that money spent on schools should be used
for educational reasons (not for something like replacing the
shrubbery on the school's property). But you disagree completely
on the educational goals the the money should help fulfill.
For your topic, simply think through
similar positions -- what things do you and an opponent agree on?
What would you have similar ideas about? What would you disagree
about?
- Put yourself in your reader's place.
What doubts does your reader have about your position? What ideas
is your reader skeptical of? After you list the things that your
reader is likely to doubt, go back through the list and try to
come up with two or three reasons that your reader has these
doubts. You can create a chart like this one to help organize your
notes:
Reader's Doubts
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Reasons
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doubt that we can find good
equipment for the school within a reasonable budget
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prices for computer equipment
are high and it may require a lot of work to find good
equipment that we can afford. who will pay for that
work?
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Once you're created a list of all the
doubts, go back to your chart and add a third column,
counter-points. For each of the doubts that is listed, add a
response in the counter-point column that will help clear up the
reader's doubt.
Reader's Doubts
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Reasons
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Counter-Points
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doubt that we can find good
equipment for the school within a reasonable budget
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prices for computer equipment
are high and it may require a lot of work to find good
equipment that we can afford. who will pay for that
work?
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Educational leasing &
purchase plans are available that make the price lower
than it would usually be. Most companies will provide
some help on designing and choosing the equipment.
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- Consider the political situation
surrounding the issue that you're writing about. How is your
audience affected by the issue? Will they gain something? lose
something? both? What territorial rights are involved? Will your
readers need to change the way that they do something? How will
they feel about any changes that are necessary?
For even an informative announcement,
there are political and power issues to consider. For instance, if
you were writing a message to tell people that there is going to
be construction on Main Street for the next three months, you
might consider the loss of control that some of your readers will
have once the city tells them that they cannot drive down the
street the way that they want. Others will be frustrated by
traffic congestion. Merchants on the road may feel unhappy about
the noise and the effect on their businesses. Still other readers
will be angry that money is being spent resurfacing Main Street
when there are giant potholes in side streets.
For all the power and territory issues
involved, think about how you can best respond to your readers.
What can you say to indicate that you understand the readers'
position and still convince them that the change or your position
is best?
- What does your audience know about
your subject area? Begin by brainstorming or freewriting for a few
minutes on your topic itself. What is it that you're writing
about?
Next, skip down a bit, and brainstorm
or freewrite on what your readers know about your topic and where
they have learned what they know.
Now, think about the relationship
between the subject and your readers' knowledge. Think about the
special terms and jargon that you know about your topic. What will
you need to define? Are there acronyms that you'll need to
explain? Look back over your original brainstorming on your topic
--are there ideas or words that will need details for your
readers? Make a list of all the things that you'll need to deal
with to help your readers understand.
- How will you tell that your writing
is successful? When you write something, you want your readers to
do or think something as a result. Perhaps you want them to change
the way that they do something (for instance, participate in a
recycling program on your campus rather than throwing away
aluminum cans). Maybe you want them to change their minds about an
issue or to modify their position a little (for instance, you
might want to convince readers that a school uniform program would
be good for the local public school system).
One way to measure your success is to
consider whether your readers do what you want after reading your
paper. For your topic, make a list of the things that you want
your readers to do or to think after reading your paper. Branch
off each thing that you want readers to do or to think, and note
the reasons you want them to do so. For instance, you might want
readers to participate in a recycling program because it's better
for the environment and because the school earns money for
recycling. Remember as you move through the list to think about
the reasons from the readers' point of view too. Your readers may
not care that the school earns money by recycling aluminum. You
have to include all the details that WILL make your readers care
-- what will the money be spent on? How will the money affect your
readers?
- Think about the background of your
readers: how old are they? what kind of education do they have?
what kind of families do they come from? where do they live? what
beliefs and values do they hold? Choose three representative types
from your audience and write a one-paragraph character sketch on
each of the three that gives details on your readers. You might
choose different extremes in your readership such as the most
conservative readers and the most liberal reader. You could also
consider gender, age, education, and so forth. The point is to
choose three different kinds of people who will read your paper
and think through what you know about those readers' ideas,
beliefs, and backgrounds.
- First impressions are important. How
will your readers first react to your topic? Are they likely to be
interested? to be annoyed? to be appalled? That first reaction can
affect everything else that your readers see in the paper. If they
start out annoyed, you'll have a harder time convincing them to
adopt your point of view or make the change or decisions that you
ask. Once you've identified your readers' first reaction,
brainstorm on the things that you can do to keep their attention.
What can you say or do that will keep them reading once they know
what the topic is? What techniques might you use to get their
attention before they learn what your topic is? Think about that
first paragraph that will introduce your ideas to your readers.
How can you hook their interest and keep them reading to the
end?
- What if the medium were
different? Think about the paper that you're working on and the
ways that your knowledge of advertisements and stories on
television and in newspapers and magazines can help you learn more
about your readers.
If you were writing an advertisement
or public service announcement rather than a paper, where would
the advertisement or announcement appear? What channel? During
what shows? Or what magazine? Which section? And what would the
advertisement or announcement look like? More importantly, WHY
would it appear on those channels during those shows or in those
sections of those particular magazines? How does the audience
relate to the shows and magazines where the information would
appear?
Once you think about what you know
about your readers based on where a similar advertisement or
public service announcement would appear, think about similar
things that you've seen. How do they get and keep the readers'
attention? What techniques can you use?
Originally
Posted October 30, 1998 on
the Daedalus Website.
Posted Sunday, 12-Jun-2005 09:09:16 PDT
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